Hi everyone, here comes my speech post that everyone is not waiting for, probably. Anyways, here you can find pictures of my drafts and my final copy.
So, I didn’t technically do a complete first draft. I did several unfinished drafts that have around 300 words. The thing that will happen is that I will work on my speech, but I would forget my draft at school, or at home. So then I have to start all over again. That happened three times, resulting in three drafts. I also created a list of speech ideas from my eminent person’s book.
Finally, like three days before NoN, I sat down in front of my computer, and decided to do it once and for all. I wrote the speech, and that became my so called second version.
Because my speech is both inspirational and informational, I saw no reason to get my TALONS peers to edit my speech, as I thought, what is the point of delivering an inspirational and informational speech when everyone had already read it over five times?. Instead, that night I was with my sister in the church nursery so I asked two grade twelves at Heritage Woods, I think, to edit my speech. They weren’t that helpful by saying things like: “it’s all good”, “that’s really impressive writing”, “your English is really good” and “you should join IB”. I revised it myself with my parents, and finally, came up with my final draft, A.K.A., third draft.
Having trouble posting them here…
I have the door gif now I am cool now…’_’